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"Benign enlargement of the subarachnoid spaces in infancy is a self-limiting condition. Enlargement of the subarachnoid spaces typically resolves spontaneously by 23 years of age, although macrocephaly may persist despite radiological resolution of the cerebrospinal fluid collections 3."

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"Benign enlargement of the subarachnoid spaces in infancy (BESS or BESSI), also known as benign external hydrocephalus (BEH), is a benign enlargement of the subarachnoid spaces in infants. It usually involves the frontal lobe subarachnoid spaces, and it is characterised clinically by macrocephaly or frontal bossing."

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"Benign enlargement of the subarachnoid spaces in infancy (BESS or BESSI), also known as benign external hydrocephalus (BEH), is a benign enlargement of the subarachnoid spaces in infants. It usually involves the frontal lobe subarachnoid spaces, and it is characterised clinically by macrocephaly or frontal bossing."

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  • H1 Terminology
  • H1 Usage
  • H1 Epidemiology
  • H2 Risk factors
  • H2 Associations
  • H1 Clinical presentation
  • H2 Complications
  • H1 Diagnosis
  • H2 Diagnostic criteria
  • H2 Diagnostic clues
  • H1 Pathology
  • H2 Aetiology
  • H2 Location
  • H2 Classification
  • H2 Macroscopic appearance
  • H2 Microscopic appearance
  • H2 Immunophenotype
  • H2 Markers
  • H2 Genetics
  • H1 Radiographic features
  • H2 Plain radiograph
  • H2 Mammography
  • H2 Antenatal ultrasound
  • H2 Transoesophageal echocardiography
  • H2 Ultrasound
  • H2 CT
  • H3 Dual-energy CT
  • H2 Angiography (DSA)
  • H2 MRI
  • H2 CT/MRI
  • H2 Nuclear medicine
  • H3 PET-CT
  • H3 PET-MRI
  • H1 Radiology report
  • H1 Treatment and prognosis
  • H2 Complications
  • H1 History and etymology
  • H1 Differential diagnosis
  • H2 Clinical differential diagnosis
  • H1 Practical points
  • H1 See also

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"Complications"

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"another key distinction between benign enlargement of the subarachnoid spaces and a subdural fluid collection is that in the former the cortical veins will be seen coursing up to the inner table of the calvaria on MRI and ultrasound; whereas in the latter the veins are displaced away from the inner table, as the arachnoid membrane and subarachnoid space are displaced (see cortical vein sign)"

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"Infants have an increased susceptibility to subdural haemorrhage, which may occur spontaneously or following minor head trauma. The presence of a subdural haematoma in an infant with benign enlargement of the subarachnoid spaces should not, in isolation, be regarded as diagnostic of abusive head trauma; rather, it should be interpreted in conjunction with the clinical history, physical examination, ophthalmologic findings, and other neuroimaging features 4."

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"Infants have an increased susceptibility to subdural haemorrhage, which may occur spontaneously or following minor head trauma. The presence of a subdural haematoma in an infant with benign enlargement of the subarachnoid spaces should not, in isolation, be regarded as diagnostic of abusive head trauma; rather, it should be interpreted in conjunction with the clinical history, physical examination, ophthalmologic findings, and other neuroimaging features 4."

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