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Lint: bland-thrombus

EG List And
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"In patients with malignancy, bland thrombus may form due to abnormalities of Virchow's triad, e.g., venous flow haemodynamic changes secondary to extrinsic compression of a nearby tumour, not by direct invasion, usually at the portal vein and IVC in a setting of hepatic, renal, or other proximate malignancy. Correct discrimination between tumour thrombus and bland thrombus is helpful for therapeutic strategies and prognostication."

Line 3:105 · An e.g. list gives selected examples, so it should not end with 'and' or 'or': 'e.g., venous flow haemodynamic changes secondary to extrinsic compression of a nearby tumour, not by direct invasion, usually at the portal vein and IVC in a setting of hepatic, renal, or'.
Semicolons
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"Bland thrombus is a term used to describe any non-malignant venous thrombus (e.g. a "normal" DVT). However, the term is most often used in the context of malignancy to differentiate between non-malignant and malignant clots, as their management may differ; of course, they often coexist."

Line 1:283 · Use semicolons judiciously.
Commas
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"In patients with malignancy, bland thrombus may form due to abnormalities of Virchow's triad, e.g., venous flow haemodynamic changes secondary to extrinsic compression of a nearby tumour, not by direct invasion, usually at the portal vein and IVC in a setting of hepatic, renal, or other proximate malignancy. Correct discrimination between tumour thrombus and bland thrombus is helpful for therapeutic strategies and prognostication."

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