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"Bloom syndrome is a rare autosomal recessive disorder characterised by short stature, brachydactyly, malar hypoplasia and facial telangiectasia, erythema and cafe au lait spots. Affected individuals have an increased risk of developing malignancies."

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"There is extreme chromosomal fragility observed in Bloom syndrome which is due to defect in DNA synthesis as a result of DNA ligase I deficiency and affected individuals show extreme hypersensitivity to ultraviolet rays. T-lymphocytes, B-lymphoblastoid and fibroblast cells are particularly affected."

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