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"heptavalent equine serum derived antitoxin (suitable for patients > 1 year old)"

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"In the United States, 162 cases of botulism were reported between 2011-2015, most of which were infant botulism (up to 88%). The number of cases per year and relative proportions of cases have been relatively stable for the past 10 years."

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"Before 1950s, mortality for food related botulism was 60-70%. This gradually fell through the years and between 1975-2009, the mortality was 3%. In 2018, 242 cases of botulism were reported to the CDC."

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"Clostridium botulinum is a bacteria found in a variety of locations including soil, rivers, sea and dust. The bacteria are also sometimes found in preserved food (vegetables, meat or fish) particularly if it is home-canned. Other bacteria of similar genus which could produce a similar toxin include Clostridium baratii and Clostridium butyricum."

Line 27:4 · Italics should be used only in exceptional circumstances: '<em>Clostridium botulinum</em> is a bacteria found in a variety of locations including soil, rivers, sea and dust. The bacteria are also sometimes found in preserved food (vegetables, meat or fish) particularly if it is home-canned. Other bacteria of similar genus which could produce a similar toxin include <em>Clostridium baratii</em> and <em>Clostridium butyricum</em>'

"Botulinum toxin has multiple subtypes, namely A, B, E, F, G and H. The majority of cases of botulism are due to subtypes A and B. Whilst most Clostridium botulinum produce a single toxin subtype, there have been reports of some strains producing dual toxin subtypes. Of the subtypes, type A is the most potent, followed by B."

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"Clostridium botulinum is a bacteria found in a variety of locations including soil, rivers, sea and dust. The bacteria are also sometimes found in preserved food (vegetables, meat or fish) particularly if it is home-canned. Other bacteria of similar genus which could produce a similar toxin include Clostridium baratii and Clostridium butyricum."

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"Clostridium botulinum is a bacteria found in a variety of locations including soil, rivers, sea and dust. The bacteria are also sometimes found in preserved food (vegetables, meat or fish) particularly if it is home-canned. Other bacteria of similar genus which could produce a similar toxin include Clostridium baratii and Clostridium butyricum."

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"Botulinum toxin has multiple subtypes, namely A, B, E, F, G and H. The majority of cases of botulism are due to subtypes A and B. Whilst most Clostridium botulinum produce a single toxin subtype, there have been reports of some strains producing dual toxin subtypes. Of the subtypes, type A is the most potent, followed by B."

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"improper cooking, preservation or canning techniques"

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"botulinum toxin injections (e.g. for cosmesis, migraine, movement disorders)"

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