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Oxford Comma
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"As opposed to necrobiotic nodules in simple rheumatoid arthritis, in Caplan syndrome, a dust ring with inflammatory cells (granulocytes, macrophages and giant cells) surrounds the necrotic core 4-6. Dust can sometimes be identified in the necrotic core and within macrophages 6."

Line 8:134 · Use the Oxford comma in 'granulocytes, macrophages and giant'.

"There is no specific treatment for Caplan syndrome, however treatment of rheumatoid arthritis with tapered corticosteroids, methotrexate and hydroxychloroquine has demonstrated control of both articular and pulmonary manifestations 7."

Line 18:111 · Use the Oxford comma in 'corticosteroids, methotrexate and hydroxychloroquine'.
There Is
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"There is no specific treatment for Caplan syndrome, however treatment of rheumatoid arthritis with tapered corticosteroids, methotrexate and hydroxychloroquine has demonstrated control of both articular and pulmonary manifestations 7."

Line 18:4 · Don't start a sentence with 'There is'.
Biographical Lifespan
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"History and etymology"

Line 20:1 · A bold element in the History and etymology section should be a person; it would be useful to have their lifespan details: '<h4>History and etymology</h4> <p>It was first described by <strong>A Caplan</strong> '