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"Cerebral malaria is mainly encountered in young children and adults living or travelling in malaria-endemic areas. It is estimated to occur in ~2% of patients with acute Plasmodium falciparum infection, the most common species of Plasmodium that causes malaria."

Line 3:174 · Italics should be used only in exceptional circumstances: '<em>Plasmodium falciparum</em> infection, the most common species of <em>Plasmodium </em>'

"The haemorrhages are thought to occur when cerebral capillaries and small veins are occluded by sequestered Plasmodium-infected erythrocytes. Hence, this pathological process may lead to areas of infarction."

Line 8:112 · Italics should be used only in exceptional circumstances: '<em>Plasmodium</em>'
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"Cerebral malaria should be suspected when there are neurological symptoms on a background of malarial infection. Clinical presentations include: headache, altered state of consciousness, seizures, backache, vomiting, nausea, etc."

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"T2/FLAIR: non-specific hyperintensities located in the bilateral periventricular white matter, corpus callosum, occipital subcortex, basal, ganglia, and/or bilateral thalamic regions 3,8,10"

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Oxford Comma
suggestion

"The most common findings are related to ischaemia involving: deep white matter, cortex, basal ganglia, thalami and cerebellum. These areas of ischaemia can be haemorrhagic 6."

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