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"Charles Thurstan Holland (1863-1941) was a pioneering radiologist who played a pivotal role in establishing radiology as a specialty in its own right."

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"In February 1896, one of the first ever radiographs was taken in England. A young man, Robert Jones (no relation to the surgeon) had shot himself in the hand and the wound had subsequently healed. On physical exam the location of the bullet could not be ascertained. In the Department of Physics at University College in Liverpool (later the University of Liverpool) Holland assisted Oliver Lodge, a Professor of Physics, in taking an x-ray of the hand. After multiple attempts, a poor-quality blurry radiograph showed where the bullet lay, albeit with an exposure time of 90 minutes!"

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"The original set-up consisted of a three inch spark induction coil and five Grove cells (a type of 19th century battery) with an output of ~10-12 volts 1. Nitric acid had to be added to the cells for every session, and decanted off at the end, a very unpleasant task. The first tube was of a very crude design, and lacked an anticathode producing radiation of the x-rays in all directions out of the glass tube!"

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"Thurstan Holland took his very first radiograph on 29 May 1896. It was of his own hand with an exposure time of two minutes! Over the rest of 1896 he took a further 261 radiographs, covering a broad range of subjects, including normal bone growth of the hand, foreign bodies, arthritis, fractures and a stillbirth."

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"He was appointed honorary radiologist to the Royal Southern Hospital in Liverpool in 1896, and worked there until 1904. This may have been the first appointment of a radiologist in the world 1. The first x-ray department was a basement room, with a hard stone floor, perpetual damp, no heating and a single sink with cold water only. He had no assistants, no official position on the medical staff, and did not even receive a salary! He later said “From a purely monetary point of view, it meant bankruptcy. It cost me far more than I ever made out of it.”"

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"He was appointed honorary radiologist to the Royal Southern Hospital in Liverpool in 1896, and worked there until 1904. This may have been the first appointment of a radiologist in the world 1. The first x-ray department was a basement room, with a hard stone floor, perpetual damp, no heating and a single sink with cold water only. He had no assistants, no official position on the medical staff, and did not even receive a salary! He later said “From a purely monetary point of view, it meant bankruptcy. It cost me far more than I ever made out of it.”"

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"Charles Thurstan Holland was born in Bridgwater, Somerset on 7 March 1863. He studied medicine at University College Hospital in London, graduating in 1888 with MRCS, LRCP. He started working as a general practitioner in Liverpool in 1889, where he struck up a friendship with Robert Jones (1857-1933), a trailblazing orthopaedic surgeon. Indeed the Jones fracture was named after the surgeon. Holland started assisting Jones in his large surgical Sunday free clinic."

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"In February 1896, one of the first ever radiographs was taken in England. A young man, Robert Jones (no relation to the surgeon) had shot himself in the hand and the wound had subsequently healed. On physical exam the location of the bullet could not be ascertained. In the Department of Physics at University College in Liverpool (later the University of Liverpool) Holland assisted Oliver Lodge, a Professor of Physics, in taking an x-ray of the hand. After multiple attempts, a poor-quality blurry radiograph showed where the bullet lay, albeit with an exposure time of 90 minutes!"

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"Soon they replaced it with a focused x-ray tube, as designed by Herbert Jackson, professor of chemistry at King's College London, creating a focused beam of x-rays, allowing much sharper images to be produced."

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"In 1904 he moved to the Liverpool Royal Infirmary, a major academic centre, to set up a new department of radiology, where he was employed as honorary radiologist until 1923. He was also radiologist to the Royal Liverpool Children’s Hospital from 1907-1932. He was appointed lecturer in radiology at the University of Liverpool in 1920, a post he held until 1931. The University of Liverpool awarded him an Honorary Master in Surgery for organising its first Radiology Diploma in 1922."

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"President of the Electro-therapeutical section of the Royal Society of Medicine (1914)"

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"Honorary Master of Surgery (ChM) University of Liverpool (1922)"

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"President of the First International Congress of Radiology (1925)"

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"Honorary Fellow of the Royal College of Surgeons (1928)"

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"President of the British Institute of Radiology (1929)"

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"Honorary Fellow of the American College of Radiology"

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"Honorary member of radiologic societies in Austria, Germany, Italy, Norway, and Switzerland"

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  • H1 Early life
  • H1 Later life
  • H2 Accolades
  • H1 Legacy
  • H1 See also

"Pioneering radiologist"

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"Thurstan Holland fragment and other discoveries"

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"Responsible use of x-rays"

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"Thurstan Holland took his very first radiograph on 29 May 1896. It was of his own hand with an exposure time of two minutes! Over the rest of 1896 he took a further 261 radiographs, covering a broad range of subjects, including normal bone growth of the hand, foreign bodies, arthritis, fractures and a stillbirth."

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"Those early years were hard; he personally performed all the radiographs himself, followed by their developing and printing. He usually did not leave work before midnight 1. He chalked up two important discoveries in that first year. Within six months he had demonstrated the chronology of the appearance of the major ossification centres of the human skeleton. He also realised the import of the Thurstan Holland fragment, as found in Salter-Harris type II fractures."

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