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Lint: coeliac-artery-compression-syndrome

Adjectival Hyphens
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"post-stenotic dilatation or evidence of collateral formation"

Line 30:8 · Only use medical adjectival hyphens where the letters at the end and start of the compound word are the same, e.g. post-transplant. In this case, don't use the hyphen: 'post-stenotic'.

"Additional features that may be appreciated include post-stenotic dilatation, prominent collaterals, such as the gastroduodenal and common hepatic arteries 3, and thickening of the median arcuate ligament. A thickness of the median arcuate ligament of greater than 4 mm is considered abnormal 4."

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Acronyms
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"The clinical entity was described in 1963 by P T Harjola, a Finnish surgeon who performed the first median arcuate ligament release 9. A larger case series of 15 patients was published in the American Journal of Roentgenology in 1965 by the radiologist J David Dunbar and surgeon Samuel Marable, both from Ohio, USA 10."

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There Is
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"There is considerable variation in positioning of both the coeliac trunk and the diaphragm 1. In some, the ligament is positioned more inferiorly relative to the coeliac artery, resulting in compression. The degree of compression typically varies with respiration, most accentuated during end-expiration when the two structures move closer together."

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Biographical Lifespan
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"History and etymology"

Line 47:1 · A bold element in the History and etymology section should be a person; it would be useful to have their lifespan details: '<h4>History and etymology</h4> <p>The clinical entity was described in 1963 by <strong>P T Harjola</strong>, a Finnish surgeon who performed the first median arcuate ligament release <sup>9</sup>. A larger case series of 15 patients was published in the <a>American Journal of Roentgenology</a> in 1965 by the radiologist <strong>J David Dunbar</strong> '