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Lint: cytomegalovirus-retinitis

EG List And
warning

"The treatment for CMV retinitis involves administration of antiviral medications (e.g. valganciclovir, ganciclovir, foscarnet, or cidofovir). In one study, it was found that the mortality rate for patients with CMV retinitis was 28% 7."

Line 25:86 · An e.g. list gives selected examples, so it should not end with 'and' or 'or': 'e.g. valganciclovir, ganciclovir, foscarnet, or'.
Oxford Comma
suggestion

"Additionally, MRI and CT brain may show the presence of concurrent CMV encephalitis."

Line 23:4 · Use the Oxford comma in 'Additionally, MRI and CT'.