Line 5:12·Do not use plurals in parentheses such as in 'eye(s)'.
"pain in eye(s)"
Line 7:16·Do not use plurals in parentheses such as in 'eye(s)'.
Inline EG
suggestion
"Episcleritis is usually self-limiting, although topical treatments may be used (e.g. lubricants, nonsteroidal antiinflammatory drugs, corticosteroids)."
Line 24:83·Consider replacing a bracketed e.g. with an inline e.g. after a comma.