"It was initially described in 1925 by a Canadian pathologist GF Laughlen after autopsies on five different patients, three of whom were children 6,7."
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"History and etymology"
Line 25:1·A bold element in the History and etymology section should be a person; it would be useful to have their lifespan details: '<h4>History and etymology</h4> <p>It was initially described in 1925 by a Canadian pathologist <strong>GF Laughlen</strong> '