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Lint: femoral-facial-syndrome

Oxford Comma
suggestion

"Femoral facial syndrome can cause varying degrees of femoral malformation ranging from hypoplasia to aplasia/agenesis. Various facial malformations have been described, most commonly resembling Robin sequence with cleft palate, micrognathia or retrognathia."

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"Many other features have been variably described, such as a short nose, long philtrum, thin upper lip, ear malformations, as well as pelvic, renal and central nervous system anomalies 2. One study found that up to 80% of affected patients had normal intellectual development 1."

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Commas
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"Many other features have been variably described, such as a short nose, long philtrum, thin upper lip, ear malformations, as well as pelvic, renal and central nervous system anomalies 2. One study found that up to 80% of affected patients had normal intellectual development 1."

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There Is
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"There is no specific treatment for this disease. The management relies on a multidisciplinary approach to the various orthopaedic and maxillofacial problems faced by patients."

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