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Lint: flavouring-related-lung-disease

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"It is thought to be mostly triggered by volatile α-dicarbonyl compounds, particularly diacetyl (2,3-butanedione) and 2,3-pentanedione which may be present in food production facilities that make food products such as biscuits, cereal, chocolate, and coffee 3. This may result in a bronchiolitis obliterans-type picture 1."

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