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Lint: haemophilic-pseudotumour

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suggestion

"Ultrasonography, CT and MRI have significant roles in detecting pseudotumours, especially when they are in the pelvis."

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"X-ray is useful in diagnosing intraosseous pseudotumours. They appear as well-defined, unilocular or multiloculated, lytic, expansile lesions of variable size. It can involve metaphysis, diaphysis and epiphysis of long bones."

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"X-ray is useful in diagnosing intraosseous pseudotumours. They appear as well-defined, unilocular or multiloculated, lytic, expansile lesions of variable size. It can involve metaphysis, diaphysis and epiphysis of long bones."

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"Other findings include endosteal scalloping, perilesional sclerosis, cortical thinning or thickening, trabeculations and septations. Pathological fractures can also be present."

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"The ideal treatment is prevention with adequate management of acute bleeds (e.g. rest, factor replacement, physiotherapy, etc.) 6. If development of a pseudotumour occurs, multiple management options have been described, including low-dose radiotherapy, percutaneous curettage, surgical resection, or filling with bone graft or other compounds 5,6."

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