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Acronyms
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"The diagnosis of AIDS rests on the progression to clinical or serological evidence of immunodeficiency. According to the US CDC definition, one has AIDS if he/she is infected with HIV and presents with either:"

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Commas
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"Following infection with HIV, individuals experience a non-specific, flu-like seroconversion illness, manifesting as fever, sore throat, lymphadenopathy, skin rash, and malaise. This is followed by an asymptomatic incubation period, lasting several years."

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Semicolons
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"expression of the homing markers in the GALT is decreased because there is damage to its integrity; the damage results in bacterial translocation which causes a systemic immune activation 4"

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