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"T2/FLAIR:"

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"T1 C+ (Gd):"

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"SWI: may have microhaemorrhages 1"

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"DWI/ADC: areas of ischaemia/cytotoxic oedema result in restricted diffusion"

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"CBF: increased perfusion"

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"MR spectroscopy:"

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Adjectival Hyphens
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"because some of the MRI features of ICANS can be non-specific, having a pre-therapy baseline scan to compare to may be helpful 12"

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Acronyms
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"The pathophysiology of ICANS is not fully understood but it is thought to involve cytokine-mediated inflammation and disruption of the blood-brain barrier 1,3. Some of the cytokines that have been implicated in ICANS include interleukin-6 (IL-6), interferon-gamma (IFN-gamma), granulocyte-macrophage colony-stimulating factor (GM-CSF), tumour necrosis factor-alpha (TNF-alpha), and IL-213. These cytokines may activate microglia and astrocytes in the central nervous system and cause neuroinflammation 3."

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Ranges
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"The mortality rate of ICANS has been reported to range from 0-11% depending on the study population and definition used. Factors that have been associated with poor outcome include older age higher grade longer duration and delayed onset."

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  • H1 Terminology
  • H1 Usage
  • H1 Epidemiology
  • H2 Risk factors
  • H2 Associations
  • H1 Clinical presentation
  • H2 Complications
  • H1 Diagnosis
  • H2 Diagnostic criteria
  • H2 Diagnostic clues
  • H1 Pathology
  • H2 Aetiology
  • H2 Location
  • H2 Classification
  • H2 Macroscopic appearance
  • H2 Microscopic appearance
  • H2 Immunophenotype
  • H2 Markers
  • H2 Genetics
  • H1 Radiographic features
  • H2 Plain radiograph
  • H2 Mammography
  • H2 Antenatal ultrasound
  • H2 Transoesophageal echocardiography
  • H2 Ultrasound
  • H2 CT
  • H3 Dual-energy CT
  • H2 Angiography (DSA)
  • H2 MRI
  • H2 CT/MRI
  • H2 Nuclear medicine
  • H3 PET-CT
  • H3 PET-MRI
  • H1 Radiology report
  • H1 Treatment and prognosis
  • H2 Complications
  • H1 History and etymology
  • H1 Differential diagnosis
  • H2 Clinical differential diagnosis
  • H1 Practical points
  • H1 See also

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"Immune effector cell-associated neurotoxicity syndrome (ICANS), previously known as cytokine release encephalopathy syndrome (CRES) or chimeric antigen receptor (CAR) T-cell-related encephalopathy syndrome (CRES), is a neuropsychiatric syndrome that can occur days to weeks following the administration of certain types of immunotherapy, especially immune effector cell and T-cell engaging therapies (e.g. chimeric antigen receptor (CAR) T-cell therapy, bispecific T-cell engagers (BiTE)) 1-4. It can result in life-threatening cerebral oedema."

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"The pathophysiology of ICANS is not fully understood but it is thought to involve cytokine-mediated inflammation and disruption of the blood-brain barrier 1,3. Some of the cytokines that have been implicated in ICANS include interleukin-6 (IL-6), interferon-gamma (IFN-gamma), granulocyte-macrophage colony-stimulating factor (GM-CSF), tumour necrosis factor-alpha (TNF-alpha), and IL-213. These cytokines may activate microglia and astrocytes in the central nervous system and cause neuroinflammation 3."

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Commas
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"ICANS has a heterogeneous and non-specific clinical presentation and may manifest as encephalopathy/delirium, headache, myelopathy, aphasia, lethargy, difficulty concentrating, agitation, tremor, seizures, and symptoms of increased cranial pressure 1,4,6,10. In a minority of cases, progression to obtundation, coma and death can be rapid 1. Onset tends to be within days or weeks (most within 1 week) of CAR T-cell infusion, but this depends on the exact product used 1."

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Oxford Comma
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"ICANS has a heterogeneous and non-specific clinical presentation and may manifest as encephalopathy/delirium, headache, myelopathy, aphasia, lethargy, difficulty concentrating, agitation, tremor, seizures, and symptoms of increased cranial pressure 1,4,6,10. In a minority of cases, progression to obtundation, coma and death can be rapid 1. Onset tends to be within days or weeks (most within 1 week) of CAR T-cell infusion, but this depends on the exact product used 1."

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"The treatment of ICANS depends on its severity and on the underlying cause. Many therapies are supportive and aimed to control specific manifestations (e.g. antiseizure medications for seizures)."

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