Line 2:1·A bold element in the History and etymology section should be a person; it would be useful to have their lifespan details: '<h4>History and etymology</h4> <p>Interparietal hernias were first described by the Danish physician, mathematician and theologian <strong>Thomas Bartholin</strong> '
Oxford Comma
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"Interparietal hernias were first described by the Danish physician, mathematician and theologian Thomas Bartholin in 1661 4,5."
Line 3:61·Use the Oxford comma in 'physician, mathematician and theologian'.