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Lint: investigating-amblyopia-summary

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"affects 2-3% of the population1,2"

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"Amblyopia, often referred to as a "lazy eye", is a vision development disorder where an eye fails to achieve normal visual acuity, despite the use of prescription spectacles or contact lenses."

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"Amblyopia, often referred to as a "lazy eye", is a vision development disorder where an eye fails to achieve normal visual acuity, despite the use of prescription spectacles or contact lenses."

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"When did the patient first notice issues with your child’s vision?"

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"Does the patient squint, tilt its head, or favour one eye?"

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"Any history of premature birth or developmental delays?"

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"This is a summary article; there is no more in-depth reference article."

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"CT and MRI scans are useful in detecting structural abnormalities in the brain or eye, such as tumours, cataracts, or other anomalies that might impede normal visual development, however, amblyopia itself is largely diagnosed through clinical vision assessments and patient history, as it is fundamentally a functional disorder of the visual system rather than one identifiable by structural anomalies on imaging"

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