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Lint: magnetic-susceptibility

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"Magnetic materials may be classified as one of three types; diamagnetic, paramagnetic or ferromagnetic, depending of their susceptibilities. Diamagnetic materials will partly repel the external magnetic field, paramagnetic materials have small positive attraction and alignment with the magnetic field and ferromagnetic materials may have very strong attraction and alignment."

Line 3:62 · Use semicolons judiciously.
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"Magnetic materials may be classified as one of three types; diamagnetic, paramagnetic or ferromagnetic, depending of their susceptibilities. Diamagnetic materials will partly repel the external magnetic field, paramagnetic materials have small positive attraction and alignment with the magnetic field and ferromagnetic materials may have very strong attraction and alignment."

Line 3:67 · Use the Oxford comma in 'diamagnetic, paramagnetic or ferromagnetic'.
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