Login
Toggle sidebar

Lint: massive-rotator-cuff-tear

En Dash
error

"the lesion size anteroposterior and mediolateral"

Line 23:24 · Use a hyphen-minus ('-') instead of an en-dash ('–').

"the tear pattern crescent shape / L-shape / U-shape"

Line 26:25 · Use a hyphen-minus ('-') instead of an en-dash ('–').
Acronyms
warning

"Clinical symptoms may vary and can be categorised e.g. with the modified UCLA scoring system. In a massive tear, there will be, however, probably some functional deficit 3."

Line 5:77 · 'UCLA' has no definition. Spell it out if it's unfamiliar to the audience.
EG List And
warning

"Treatment options include interval slides, margin convergence, partial repair or tendon transfer e.g. from latissimus dorsi or pectoralis major tendons, superior capsular reconstruction in young people and several treatment strategies from conservative management over arthroscopic debridement up to reverse total shoulder arthroplasty of the glenohumeral joint in the older patients 2,3,7,8."

Line 34:101 · An e.g. list gives selected examples, so it should not end with 'and' or 'or': 'e.g. from latissimus dorsi or pectoralis major tendons, superior capsular reconstruction in young people and'.
Oxford Comma
suggestion

"supraspinatus, infraspinatus and teres minor tears"

Line 13:8 · Use the Oxford comma in 'supraspinatus, infraspinatus and teres'.
Commas
suggestion

"Treatment options include interval slides, margin convergence, partial repair or tendon transfer e.g. from latissimus dorsi or pectoralis major tendons, superior capsular reconstruction in young people and several treatment strategies from conservative management over arthroscopic debridement up to reverse total shoulder arthroplasty of the glenohumeral joint in the older patients 2,3,7,8."

Line 34:45 · More than 5 commas in a single sentence might make it more difficult to read.
There Is
suggestion

"There are many and more options but no consensus on the ideal treatment for massive or irreparable rotator cuff tears 7."

Line 35:4 · Don't start a sentence with 'There are'.