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Lint: megalencephalic-leukoencephalopathy-with-subcortical-cysts-1

Biographical Date Spacing
error

"Although Bhim Sen Singhal (1933-), an Indian neurologist, initially described a megalencephalic leukodystrophy series of cases in 1991 5,6, it is sometimes named after Marjo S van der Knaap (1958-), a Dutch paediatric neurologist, who detailed another series with clinical and radiological features in 1995 4,7."

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Biographical Name
error

"Although Bhim Sen Singhal (1933-), an Indian neurologist, initially described a megalencephalic leukodystrophy series of cases in 1991 5,6, it is sometimes named after Marjo S van der Knaap (1958-), a Dutch paediatric neurologist, who detailed another series with clinical and radiological features in 1995 4,7."

Line 30:13 · In a biographical citation, the name should be formatted correctly: '<strong>Bhim Sen Singhal </strong>(1933-), an Indian neurologist, initially described a megalencephalic leukodystrophy series of cases in 1991 <sup>5,6</sup>, it is sometimes named after<strong> Marjo S van der Knaap</strong> (1958'
There Is
suggestion

"Patients typically present with megalencephaly during the first year of life associated with mild motor developmental delay and seizures 5. There is also a gradual onset of ataxia, spasticity, dysarthria, and sometimes extrapyramidal findings. Mild mental deterioration can be observed late in life."

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Oxford Comma
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"diffuse, bilateral and symmetric T2-weighted hyperintensity and T1-weighted hypointensity in the cerebral white matter, giving a characteristic 'swollen' appearance"

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Commas
suggestion

"Although Bhim Sen Singhal (1933-), an Indian neurologist, initially described a megalencephalic leukodystrophy series of cases in 1991 5,6, it is sometimes named after Marjo S van der Knaap (1958-), a Dutch paediatric neurologist, who detailed another series with clinical and radiological features in 1995 4,7."

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