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Lint: nevoid-hyperkeratosis-of-the-nipple-and-the-areola

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"The main cause for concern in patients of NHNA is the cosmetic appearance of the nipple and areola. There is no definitive treatment; however, the various treatments that have been used are topical retinoic acid, topical calcipotriol, low-dose acitretin, cryotherapy, carbon dioxide laser, shave excision, and removal of the areola and reconstruction with a skin graft."

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"The main cause for concern in patients of NHNA is the cosmetic appearance of the nipple and areola. There is no definitive treatment; however, the various treatments that have been used are topical retinoic acid, topical calcipotriol, low-dose acitretin, cryotherapy, carbon dioxide laser, shave excision, and removal of the areola and reconstruction with a skin graft."

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"The main cause for concern in patients of NHNA is the cosmetic appearance of the nipple and areola. There is no definitive treatment; however, the various treatments that have been used are topical retinoic acid, topical calcipotriol, low-dose acitretin, cryotherapy, carbon dioxide laser, shave excision, and removal of the areola and reconstruction with a skin graft."

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