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Lint: ornithine-transcarbamylase-deficiency

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"As its name suggests, the condition is due to deficiency of ornithine transcarbamylase, which is a core component of the urea cycle. The clinical features are driven by by the accumulation of precursors of urea, principally ammonia and glutamine."

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"Clinical features depend on the severity of the condition. In affected neonates/infants, typically with severe disease, there is psychomotor slowing, malaise, vomiting, hypothermia, and apnoea, ultimately progressing to coma 1,3. In adults, typically with milder late-onset "partial" disease, there is evidence of encephalopathy 1. Acute symptoms may be triggered, such as by physiological stress, high protein intake, or medications (e.g. sodium valproate) 6."

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"medications to increase waste nitrogen excretion (e.g. sodium phenylbutyrate, sodium benzoate)"

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"avoiding medications which may precipitate hyperammonaemia (e.g. sodium valproate)"

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