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Lint: oxalosis

Commas
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"Calcium oxalate deposition most commonly affects the bone, bone marrow, blood vessels, central nervous system, peripheral nerves, retina, skin, and thyroid. There are two forms of this condition:"

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There Is
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"Calcium oxalate deposition most commonly affects the bone, bone marrow, blood vessels, central nervous system, peripheral nerves, retina, skin, and thyroid. There are two forms of this condition:"

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Oxford Comma
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"Foods that are high in oxalic acids include rhubarb, spinach, celery and cocoa 2."

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