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Lint: paget-schrotter-syndrome

Biographical Date Spacing
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"The first detailed case was described by the British surgeon and pathologist Sir James Paget (1814-1899) 4 in 1875. The German laryngologist Leopold Schrötter Ritter von Kristelli (1837-1908) 5 identified vascular trauma as a potential cause in 1894. The term Paget-Schroetter syndrome was first used by Hughes in 1948 3."

Line 13:81 · In a biographical citation, the date should be correctly spaced: '<strong>Sir</strong> <strong>James Paget </strong>(1814'
EG List And
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"It is associated with forced abduction of the upper limb and most commonly seen in young athletes who use repetitive shoulder-arm motions, e.g. weight-lifters, wrestlers, baseball pitchers or tennis players."

Line 3:143 · An e.g. list gives selected examples, so it should not end with 'and' or 'or': 'e.g. weight-lifters, wrestlers, baseball pitchers or'.
Biographical Lifespan
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"History and etymology"

Line 12:1 · A bold element in the History and etymology section should be a person; it would be useful to have their lifespan details: '<h4>History and etymology</h4> <p>The first detailed case was described by the British surgeon and pathologist <strong>Sir</strong> '