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Acronyms
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"The word "pica" is derived from the Latin word, pīca, which means magpie 4. This is due to the bird's tendency to collect a variety of objects and the belief that it could eat anything. The condition was first documented by the Greek physician Hippocrates (460-370 BCE) in the fourth century BCE 4."

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"The word "pica" is derived from the Latin word, pīca, which means magpie 4. This is due to the bird's tendency to collect a variety of objects and the belief that it could eat anything. The condition was first documented by the Greek physician Hippocrates (460-370 BCE) in the fourth century BCE 4."

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Commas
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"Pica refers to a psychiatric disorder in which patients report a craving for and compulsive consumption of substances that are not food. Substances consumed include earth, clay, plaster, paint chips, string, hair, animal faeces and stones 1."

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Oxford Comma
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"In some cases, pica only comes to the attention of clinicians due to complications such as intestinal obstruction/perforation, infections or poisoning 3. Dental complications such as caries, enamel erosion or abrasion, loss of vertical dimension occlusion and cracked teeth may also be present 2."

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