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Oxford Comma

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"Patients present with developmental delay, cerebellar and pyramidal abnormalities, and cranial nerve (V, VII, VIII and XII) dysfunction leading to neurosensorial hearing loss, swallowing impairment and oculomotor palsy ^3,6."

Line 5:40 · Use the Oxford comma in 'delay, cerebellar and pyramidal'.

"Patients present with developmental delay, cerebellar and pyramidal abnormalities, and cranial nerve (V, VII, VIII and XII) dysfunction leading to neurosensorial hearing loss, swallowing impairment and oculomotor palsy ^3,6."

Line 5:109 · Use the Oxford comma in 'VII, VIII and XII'.

"high resolution T2 weighted sequence is useful to detect cranial nerve abnormality such as V, VI, VII and VIII hypoplasia and aplasia ^4-6"

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Commas

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"Patients present with developmental delay, cerebellar and pyramidal abnormalities, and cranial nerve (V, VII, VIII and XII) dysfunction leading to neurosensorial hearing loss, swallowing impairment and oculomotor palsy ^3,6."

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Inline EG

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"variable supratentorial abnormality which is non-specific to this condition (e.g. ventriculomegaly)"

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Biographical Lifespan

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"History and etymology"

Line 24:1 · A bold element in the History and etymology section should be a person; it would be useful to have their lifespan details: '<h4>History and etymology</h4> <p>It was first described by <strong>Barth</strong> '

Lint: pontine-tegmental-cap-dysplasia