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Lint: posterior-cortical-atrophy

Acronyms
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"In addition to the above features, it is recognised the posterior cortical atrophy can coexist with other neurodegenerative features (so called PCA-plus 8). These include:"

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"Furthermore, a number of gene mutations have been identified in posterior cortical atrophy including presenilin 1 and 2 genes (PSEN1 and PSEN2), prion protein gene (PRNP), progranulin gene (GRN) and microtubule-associated protein tau gene (MAPT) 5,6."

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List Caps
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"Parkinsonian symptoms later in the disease"

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Oxford Comma
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"Approximately 25% of patients with posterior cortical atrophy will also develop visual hallucinations 1,8. These patients may represent a distinct subgroup, with hallucinations believed to be due to the complex interplay between the midbrain, thalamus and primary visual cortex, rather than the visual association areas 1."

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"Early in the course of the disease, insight and episodic memory are largely intact. As the disease progresses, however, more generalised cognitive impairment, including memory deficits, develops 8."

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"The main findings are bilateral, but often more pronounced right-sided, parietal and parieto-occipital and temporo-occipital atrophy. Hippocampi are relatively normal. The parieto-occipital sulcus is reported to be wider in posterior cortical atrophy compared to Alzheimer disease 7."

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"limb rigidity or akinesia, dystonia or myoclonus"

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"Furthermore, a number of gene mutations have been identified in posterior cortical atrophy including presenilin 1 and 2 genes (PSEN1 and PSEN2), prion protein gene (PRNP), progranulin gene (GRN) and microtubule-associated protein tau gene (MAPT) 5,6."

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