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Acronyms
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"The treatment of most psoriasis cases will involve topical agents including steroids, vitamin D analogues, calcineurin inhibitors and keratolytics 1. Phototherapy, in which patients are exposed to ultraviolet light, also improves the disease. In more severe cases, biologics such as TNF-alpha inhibitors are used."

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Semicolons
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"Psoriasis is an inflammatory dermatological disease with several variants. The most common variant is plaque psoriasis; other variants of the disease are guttate, erythrodermic and pustular psoriasis 1."

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"In most populations, psoriasis appears to affect men and women equally; about a quarter of psoriasis patients have been diagnosed with psoriatic arthritis. Careful radiological imaging studies indicate the prevalence of arthritis in these patients may be even higher 3."

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Oxford Comma
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"Psoriasis is an inflammatory dermatological disease with several variants. The most common variant is plaque psoriasis; other variants of the disease are guttate, erythrodermic and pustular psoriasis 1."

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There Is
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"There is geographic variation in psoriasis prevalence, with populations farther from the equator having a higher disease burden, e.g. prevalence rates vary from 0.05% in Taiwan 6 to 8% in Norway 2. In all populations, children are less affected than adults 2."

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Commas
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"medications, most commonly vaccines, beta-blockers, lithium, anti-malarial drugs, interferons 6,7"

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