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Lint: pulmonary-infarction

Adjectival Hyphens
error

"form a broad network with pre- and postcapillary anastomoses to the pulmonary system"

Line 22:34 · Only use medical adjectival hyphens where the letters at the end and start of the compound word are the same, e.g. post-transplant. In this case, don't use the hyphen: 'pre-'.
Oxford Comma
suggestion

"Historically, it was thought that pulmonary infarction was more common in older patients with comorbidities, especially coexisting cardiovascular disease and underlying malignancy, but rare in the young and otherwise healthy. However, research in 2015 questioned orthodox thinking with evidence that greater patient stature, decreased age (peak risk at age 40), and smoking of cigarettes are independent risk factors for developing pulmonary infarction 2,3. Furthermore, it was shown that heart failure, malignancy and pneumonia were not risk factors for the development of pulmonary infarction 2."

Line 4:510 · Use the Oxford comma in 'failure, malignancy and pneumonia'.
Semicolons
suggestion

"Usually these parenchymal findings are transient; the blood cells extravasated into the alveolar and bronchial cavities are resorbed, and the tissue regenerates ref. However, the injury may progress to infarction in certain circumstances:"

Line 29:52 · Use semicolons judiciously.
Inline EG
suggestion

"reduced flow in the bronchial arteries (e.g. shock, hypotension, use of vasodilators)"

Line 31:47 · Consider replacing a bracketed e.g. with an inline e.g. after a comma.

"increased pulmonary venous pressure (e.g. elevated pulmonary venous pressure, interstitial oedema)"

Line 32:44 · Consider replacing a bracketed e.g. with an inline e.g. after a comma.