"As is the case with a Bankart lesion, the trauma may be severe enough to involve the bony glenoid, resulting in an accompanying small flake fracture."
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Acronyms
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"POLPSA lesion"
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List Caps
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"Kim lesion"
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"Bankart lesion"
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"Hill-Sachs defect"
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"Reverse Hill-Sachs defect"
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