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Biographical Date Spacing
error

"Dr Benjamin Felson (1913-1988) and, his brother Dr Henry Felson (1907-1998), were American radiologists who popularised this sign 1. However, it was the Felsons themselves who state that Dr H (Henry) Kennon Dunham (1872-1944), an American chest physician and radiologist, was the first to describe the sign 15 years earlier (late 1920s) 1,5."

Line 23:4 · In a biographical citation, the date should be correctly spaced: '<strong>Dr Benjamin Felson </strong>(1913-1988) and, his brother <strong>Dr Henry Felson </strong>(1907'
Biographical Name
error

"Dr Benjamin Felson (1913-1988) and, his brother Dr Henry Felson (1907-1998), were American radiologists who popularised this sign 1. However, it was the Felsons themselves who state that Dr H (Henry) Kennon Dunham (1872-1944), an American chest physician and radiologist, was the first to describe the sign 15 years earlier (late 1920s) 1,5."

Line 23:4 · In a biographical citation, the name should be formatted correctly: '<strong>Dr Benjamin Felson </strong>(1913-1988) and, his brother <strong>Dr Henry Felson </strong>(1907-1998), were American radiologists who popularised this sign <sup>1</sup>. However, it was the Felsons themselves who state that <strong>Dr H (Henry) Kennon Dunham</strong> (1872'
Semicolons
suggestion

"The silhouette sign is somewhat of a misnomer and, in the true sense, actually denotes the loss of a silhouette; thus, it is sometimes also known as the loss of silhouette sign or loss of outline sign 4."

Line 1:132 · Use semicolons judiciously.
Oxford Comma
suggestion

"Recognition of this sign is useful in localising areas of airspace opacities, atelectasis or mass within the lung, with the loss of these normal silhouettes on frontal chest radiographs being generally indicative of the site of pathology 3,4:"

Line 5:74 · Use the Oxford comma in 'opacities, atelectasis or mass'.
Parentheses
suggestion

"Dr Benjamin Felson (1913-1988) and, his brother Dr Henry Felson (1907-1998), were American radiologists who popularised this sign 1. However, it was the Felsons themselves who state that Dr H (Henry) Kennon Dunham (1872-1944), an American chest physician and radiologist, was the first to describe the sign 15 years earlier (late 1920s) 1,5."

Line 23:40 · Use parentheses judiciously. There are at least 3 sets in this paragraph.