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Lint: spinal-muscular-atrophy

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"This disorder affects 1 in 6000-10000 infants 1."

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"Some authors suggest an additional type 0, also termed 'severe infantile' form, with a prognosis (without novel therapy) of just a few weeks, although this has not been widely adopted in the literature 4."

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"Spinal muscular atrophy has an autosomal recessive mode of inheritance due to mutations to the SMN1 (survival motor neurone 1) gene on chromosome 5 1,2. This mutated gene has a carrier frequency of 1 in 40 1,2. In addition to SMN1, SMN2, the homologous copy of SMN1, also plays a role in modulating the severity of the phenotype 11. Having a higher number of SMN2 copies (up to five) correlates with having a milder phenotype 11."

Line 17:99 · Italics should be used only in exceptional circumstances: '<em>SMN1</em> (survival motor neurone 1) gene on chromosome 5 <sup>1,2</sup>. This mutated gene has a carrier frequency of 1 in 40 <sup>1,2</sup>. In addition to <em>SMN1</em>, <em>SMN2</em>, the homologous copy of <em>SMN1</em>, also plays a role in modulating the severity of the phenotype <sup>11</sup>. Having a higher number of <em>SMN2</em>'
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"In infants, the most common demographic affected, this weakness classically manifests as difficulties sitting and rolling, assuming a frog-leg position, a weak cry, and increased respiratory effort with paradoxical breathing 1,3. Rarely is intellectual disability an associated feature 3."

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