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Lint: tetanus

Emphasis
warning

"Tetanus is a rare vaccine-preventable disease caused by Clostridium tetani, a ubiquitous soil bacterium which contaminates open wounds. It secretes a powerful neurotoxin which degrades neuromuscular junction function, producing muscle spasms and, despite intensive intervention, is often fatal."

Line 1:77 · Italics should be used only in exceptional circumstances: '<em>Clostridium tetani</em>'

"Clostridium tetani, a Gram-positive anaerobic bacterium, is ubiquitous globally as a spore in the soil. When local conditions are anaerobic, the C. tetani spores reproduce as vegetative bacteria which secrete tetanospasmin, an exotoxin, one of the most powerful neurotoxins ever studied 1,3. The C. tetani spores are ubiquitous in the outside environment globally and contamination of open wounds is an ever present danger. In neonates, there is a risk of infection of the umbilical stump 1."

Line 58:4 · Italics should be used only in exceptional circumstances: '<em>Clostridium tetani</em>, a Gram-positive anaerobic bacterium, is ubiquitous globally as a spore in the soil. When local conditions are anaerobic, the <em>C. tetani</em> spores reproduce as vegetative bacteria which secrete tetanospasmin, an exotoxin, one of the most powerful neurotoxins ever studied <sup>1,3</sup>. The <em>C. tetani</em>'
EG List And
warning

"neuromuscular blockers: e.g. pipecuronium, vecuronium, pancuronium or intravenous magnesium sulfate"

Line 75:32 · An e.g. list gives selected examples, so it should not end with 'and' or 'or': 'e.g. pipecuronium, vecuronium, pancuronium or'.
Semicolons
suggestion

"Classically, tetanus is characterised by tetanic spasms, which are spasms of all or localised groups of muscles (up to 4/5 cases); this often manifests initially as a feeling of muscle stiffness 1:"

Line 10:133 · Use semicolons judiciously.
Oxford Comma
suggestion

"to reduce muscle spasm, rigidity and autonomic instability and avoid exhaustion"

Line 66:25 · Use the Oxford comma in 'spasm, rigidity and autonomic'.
Inline EG
suggestion

"sedatives: benzodiazepines (e.g. midazolam, diazepam), anaesthetic agents (e.g. propofol), phenothiazines (e.g. chlorpromazine)"

Line 74:35 · Consider replacing a bracketed e.g. with an inline e.g. after a comma.
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