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Lint: third-ventriculostomy

Citation Punctuation Sup
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"Hydrocephalus may develop after a successful third ventriculostomy secondary to several reasons, despite initial relief provided by the procedure, such as 3-5,:"

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Exclamation
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"First developed in the early 1900s prior to advent of VP shunting, and at that time employed a subfrontal approach with sacrifice of the optic nerve! In 1923 a urologist by the name of William Mixter used a urethroscope to perform the first endoscopic ventriculostomy."

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Oxford Comma
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"closure or scarring of the stoma: over time, the surgical created opening (stoma) may close due to fibrosis or scarring which could be caused by inflammation, infection or individual healing response 3"

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Biographical Lifespan
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"History and etymology"

Line 13:1 · A bold element in the History and etymology section should be a person; it would be useful to have their lifespan details: '<h4>History and etymology</h4> <p>First developed in the early 1900s prior to advent of <a>VP shunting</a>, and at that time employed a subfrontal approach with sacrifice of the optic nerve! In 1923 a urologist by the name of <strong>William Mixter</strong> '