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Acronyms
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"a parenchymal AVM or dural fistula draining into the true (formed) vein of Galen, so the dilated vein also drains normal brain parenchyma"

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"Vein of Galen malformations are named after Galen of Pergamon (gr. Γαληνός, also known as Aelius Galenus or Claudius Galenus) (AD 129-199), a Greek physician and philosopher in the Roman Empire 4."

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Headings Case
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"MR angiography"

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Headings Valid
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  • H1 Terminology
  • H1 Usage
  • H1 Epidemiology
  • H2 Risk factors
  • H2 Associations
  • H1 Clinical presentation
  • H2 Complications
  • H1 Diagnosis
  • H2 Diagnostic criteria
  • H2 Diagnostic clues
  • H1 Pathology
  • H2 Aetiology
  • H2 Location
  • H2 Classification
  • H2 Macroscopic appearance
  • H2 Microscopic appearance
  • H2 Immunophenotype
  • H2 Markers
  • H2 Genetics
  • H1 Radiographic features
  • H2 Plain radiograph
  • H2 Mammography
  • H2 Antenatal ultrasound
  • H2 Transoesophageal echocardiography
  • H2 Ultrasound
  • H2 CT
  • H3 Dual-energy CT
  • H2 Angiography (DSA)
  • H2 MRI
  • H2 CT/MRI
  • H2 Nuclear medicine
  • H3 PET-CT
  • H3 PET-MRI
  • H1 Radiology report
  • H1 Treatment and prognosis
  • H2 Complications
  • H1 History and etymology
  • H1 Differential diagnosis
  • H2 Clinical differential diagnosis
  • H1 Practical points
  • H1 See also

"CT and MRI"

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"CT angiography"

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"MR angiography"

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"Timing of intervention"

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"Embolisation"

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"Prognosis"

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Parentheses
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"The anomaly is actually due to a cerebral arteriovenous fistula of the median prosencephalic vein (MPV) (a precursor of the vein of Galen) occurring at 6-11 weeks gestation and not a malformation (no nidus present). The original connections between the choroidal arteries (that initially were supplying the developing brain tissue before the shift to the developing cerebral vessels) and the median prosencephalic vein persist and result in enlargement of the latter. Hence, arterial blood is shunted from (high pressure) choroidal arteries to the (low pressure) vein of Galen 10."

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Semicolons
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"The MPV fails to regress and becomes aneurysmal, and the true vein of Galen does not form. The straight sinus is frequently absent, hypoplastic, or stenotic; venous drainage is therefore commonly via a persistent falcine sinus into the superior sagittal sinus 5."

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Biographical Lifespan
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"History and etymology"

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