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Lint: volkmann-ischaemic-contracture

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"A number of deformities can occur. In the upper extremity, this includes elbow flexion, forearm pronation, wrist flexion, thumb flexion and adduction, digital metacarpophalangeal joint extension, and interphalangeal joint flexion. The affected limb may become dysfunctional, painful and may lose sensitivity."

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"A number of deformities can occur. In the upper extremity, this includes elbow flexion, forearm pronation, wrist flexion, thumb flexion and adduction, digital metacarpophalangeal joint extension, and interphalangeal joint flexion. The affected limb may become dysfunctional, painful and may lose sensitivity."

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