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Biographical Date Spacing
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"It is named after Heinrich Wilhelm Gottfried Waldeyer (1836-1921); although from 1916 until his death he became Wilhelm Gottfried von Waldeyer-Hartz following an elevation to a Prussian peerage; Hartz was his mother's maiden name. He was a celebrated German anatomist, physiologist and pathologist 2,3."

Line 11:22 · In a biographical citation, the date should be correctly spaced: '<strong>Heinrich Wilhelm Gottfried Waldeyer </strong>(1836'
Biographical Lifespan
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"History and etymology"

Line 10:1 · A bold element in the History and etymology section should be a person; it would be useful to have their lifespan details: '<h4>History and etymology</h4> <p>It is named after <strong>Heinrich Wilhelm Gottfried Waldeyer </strong>(1836-1921); although from 1916 until his death he became <strong>Wilhelm Gottfried von Waldeyer-Hartz</strong> '
Semicolons
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"It is named after Heinrich Wilhelm Gottfried Waldeyer (1836-1921); although from 1916 until his death he became Wilhelm Gottfried von Waldeyer-Hartz following an elevation to a Prussian peerage; Hartz was his mother's maiden name. He was a celebrated German anatomist, physiologist and pathologist 2,3."

Line 11:86 · Use semicolons judiciously.

"It is named after Heinrich Wilhelm Gottfried Waldeyer (1836-1921); although from 1916 until his death he became Wilhelm Gottfried von Waldeyer-Hartz following an elevation to a Prussian peerage; Hartz was his mother's maiden name. He was a celebrated German anatomist, physiologist and pathologist 2,3."

Line 11:231 · Use semicolons judiciously.
Oxford Comma
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"It is named after Heinrich Wilhelm Gottfried Waldeyer (1836-1921); although from 1916 until his death he became Wilhelm Gottfried von Waldeyer-Hartz following an elevation to a Prussian peerage; Hartz was his mother's maiden name. He was a celebrated German anatomist, physiologist and pathologist 2,3."

Line 11:296 · Use the Oxford comma in 'anatomist, physiologist and pathologist'.