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Lint: acute-bronchitis

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"Acute bronchitis is usually an inflammatory reaction to a virus. However, rarely, there may be a bacterial cause, or possibly an inflammatory response to an irritant, e.g. smoke, dust, or fumes."

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"Acute bronchitis is usually an inflammatory reaction to a virus. However, rarely, there may be a bacterial cause, or possibly an inflammatory response to an irritant, e.g. smoke, dust, or fumes."

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