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"Historical background "

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"as a general rule, biologically, cancers in younger women tend to grow faster and hence metastasise earlier. The lag period in the time before a lesion is picked up is therefore potentially shorter in women under 50 than in postmenopausal women. Some of the cancers seen in screening in those over 50 were actually potentially diagnosable when the patient was under 50 years 9. Nonetheless, on a population basis, in certain contexts, specifically low resource settings, screening populations under 50 is not recommended 14. Recommendations vary country by country and across different professional organisations within the same country."

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"although it is currently accepted that screening is not cost-effective after a certain age, as life expectancy rises, the precise age for each population is currently a matter of ongoing research."

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"unfortunately, there are currently no pathological or imaging features to distinguish the progressive cancers - with lethal potential - from the indolent cases. In general, much overdiagnosis will likely represent cases of low-grade DCIS (ductal carcinoma in situ) and those cases of indolent IDC that on review were actually present on mammograms of years ago but have only now been diagnosed for whatever reason. Some cases of cancers that are well followed without intervention do not seem to change much with time in terms of how they appear on radiological studies available at present. Some breast cancers will not be fatal. Indeed in some autopsy series, up to 2% of female autopsies have breast cancer."

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Strong
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"There are three steps necessary to prove that screening is effective in breast cancer 7:"

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Acronyms
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"The initial literature support for screening came from the Two Counties Trial in Sweden. Follow-up for the trial participants continues, and the data support the continued use of screening to detect breast cancer at an early stage when the therapy is potentially curative and cosmetically acceptable. The Two Counties trial and the subsequent Health Insurance Plan (HIP) study in New York showed a decrease in deaths from breast cancer in those aged 40-74 years. A direct result of the HIP study was that screening was introduced in the USA, although it is not performed universally on all relevant populations there."

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Emphasis
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"Most cases of breast cancer are understood to be sporadic. The prevalence of genetic mutations associated with breast cancer, such as the BRCA1 and BRCA2 genes, varies by population. Although some studies look at the occurrence of breast cancer in people with a first-degree family history, this does not mean that all of these cases are genetic."

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Expected headings

  • H1 Terminology
  • H1 Usage
  • H1 Epidemiology
  • H2 Risk factors
  • H2 Associations
  • H1 Clinical presentation
  • H2 Complications
  • H1 Diagnosis
  • H2 Diagnostic criteria
  • H2 Diagnostic clues
  • H1 Pathology
  • H2 Aetiology
  • H2 Location
  • H2 Classification
  • H2 Macroscopic appearance
  • H2 Microscopic appearance
  • H2 Immunophenotype
  • H2 Markers
  • H2 Genetics
  • H1 Radiographic features
  • H2 Plain radiograph
  • H2 Mammography
  • H2 Antenatal ultrasound
  • H2 Transoesophageal echocardiography
  • H2 Ultrasound
  • H2 CT
  • H3 Dual-energy CT
  • H2 Angiography (DSA)
  • H2 MRI
  • H2 CT/MRI
  • H2 Nuclear medicine
  • H3 PET-CT
  • H3 PET-MRI
  • H1 Radiology report
  • H1 Treatment and prognosis
  • H2 Complications
  • H1 History and etymology
  • H1 Differential diagnosis
  • H2 Clinical differential diagnosis
  • H1 Practical points
  • H1 See also

"The rationale behind screening"

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"Historical background "

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"Concepts of risks"

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"Controversies"

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There Is
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"There are few areas in imaging fraught with more controversy than screening for breast cancer. Due to the emotive issues surrounding the diagnosis, the scientific literature on breast screening and its issues reaches the lay press quickly and is sometimes reproduced in non-scientific, often potentially inaccurate terms."

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"There are three steps necessary to prove that screening is effective in breast cancer 7:"

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Recency
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"Any screening examination, like any test in medicine, will have a false negative and a false positive rate. Mammography as a screening exam does not find all cancers in all women, and will in some cases be read as positive in women without cancer. Nonetheless, mammography is currently believed to be the best universally available tool we have to find breast cancers reliably and reproducibly early in the disease process."

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"although it is currently accepted that screening is not cost-effective after a certain age, as life expectancy rises, the precise age for each population is currently a matter of ongoing research."

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"although it is currently accepted that screening is not cost-effective after a certain age, as life expectancy rises, the precise age for each population is currently a matter of ongoing research."

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"unfortunately, there are currently no pathological or imaging features to distinguish the progressive cancers - with lethal potential - from the indolent cases. In general, much overdiagnosis will likely represent cases of low-grade DCIS (ductal carcinoma in situ) and those cases of indolent IDC that on review were actually present on mammograms of years ago but have only now been diagnosed for whatever reason. Some cases of cancers that are well followed without intervention do not seem to change much with time in terms of how they appear on radiological studies available at present. Some breast cancers will not be fatal. Indeed in some autopsy series, up to 2% of female autopsies have breast cancer."

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Oxford Comma
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"Screening for breast cancer is often cost- and risk-effective, feasible and evidence-based; however, cost, risks and treatments available vary dramatically in different populations around the globe."

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"Screening for breast cancer is often cost- and risk-effective, feasible and evidence-based; however, cost, risks and treatments available vary dramatically in different populations around the globe."

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Semicolons
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"Screening for breast cancer is often cost- and risk-effective, feasible and evidence-based; however, cost, risks and treatments available vary dramatically in different populations around the globe."

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