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"T2: generally hyperintense signal throughout the affected muscles; calcific areas may be low signal; peri-muscular oedema may additionally appear as high signal; signal intensity may return to normal after treatment 4"

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Acronyms
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"increased ESR and C-reactive protein (CRP) levels"

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"anti-SAE"

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"Upper GI contrast study is performed to assess for Dysphagia. Dysphagia is important complication as it can cause weight loss and aspiration pneumonia which can be fatal."

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"T2: generally hyperintense signal throughout the affected muscles; calcific areas may be low signal; peri-muscular oedema may additionally appear as high signal; signal intensity may return to normal after treatment 4"

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  • H1 Terminology
  • H1 Usage
  • H1 Epidemiology
  • H2 Risk factors
  • H2 Associations
  • H1 Clinical presentation
  • H2 Complications
  • H1 Diagnosis
  • H2 Diagnostic criteria
  • H2 Diagnostic clues
  • H1 Pathology
  • H2 Aetiology
  • H2 Location
  • H2 Classification
  • H2 Macroscopic appearance
  • H2 Microscopic appearance
  • H2 Immunophenotype
  • H2 Markers
  • H2 Genetics
  • H1 Radiographic features
  • H2 Plain radiograph
  • H2 Mammography
  • H2 Antenatal ultrasound
  • H2 Transoesophageal echocardiography
  • H2 Ultrasound
  • H2 CT
  • H3 Dual-energy CT
  • H2 Angiography (DSA)
  • H2 MRI
  • H2 CT/MRI
  • H2 Nuclear medicine
  • H3 PET-CT
  • H3 PET-MRI
  • H1 Radiology report
  • H1 Treatment and prognosis
  • H2 Complications
  • H1 History and etymology
  • H1 Differential diagnosis
  • H2 Clinical differential diagnosis
  • H1 Practical points
  • H1 See also

"Subtypes"

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"Associations"

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"Fluoroscopy"

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"Barium swallow"

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There Is
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"There is a recognised female predilection. It has a bimodal age of presentation depending on the variant:"

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"There is a sixfold increased risk of malignancy in dermatomyositis (cf. twofold in polymyositis) 8. Multiple risk factors for the development of malignancy have been identified 8:"

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"There is cell-mediated injury targeted at striated muscle with resultant atrophy, oedema, coagulation necrosis, fibrosis and calcification. Additionally, it is thought that enhanced type 1 interferon signalling plays a critical role in its pathogenesis 12."

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Parentheses
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"The classic presentation is that of a myalgic symmetrical proximal myopathy with associated dermatological changes which includes a dusky-red rash over the face (e.g. heliotrope rash), arms, hands (e.g. Gottron papules), legs (e.g. holster sign) and other features (e.g. V sign and shawl sign) 10. Dysphagia, myalgia, fever and weight loss are other features 7."

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Oxford Comma
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"The classic presentation is that of a myalgic symmetrical proximal myopathy with associated dermatological changes which includes a dusky-red rash over the face (e.g. heliotrope rash), arms, hands (e.g. Gottron papules), legs (e.g. holster sign) and other features (e.g. V sign and shawl sign) 10. Dysphagia, myalgia, fever and weight loss are other features 7."

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"There is cell-mediated injury targeted at striated muscle with resultant atrophy, oedema, coagulation necrosis, fibrosis and calcification. Additionally, it is thought that enhanced type 1 interferon signalling plays a critical role in its pathogenesis 12."

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Inline EG
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"elevated muscle enzymes (e.g. CK)"

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"malignancy 1: can occur as part of a paraneoplastic syndrome (e.g. lung cancer)"

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Semicolons
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"T2: generally hyperintense signal throughout the affected muscles; calcific areas may be low signal; peri-muscular oedema may additionally appear as high signal; signal intensity may return to normal after treatment 4"

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"T2: generally hyperintense signal throughout the affected muscles; calcific areas may be low signal; peri-muscular oedema may additionally appear as high signal; signal intensity may return to normal after treatment 4"

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"T2: generally hyperintense signal throughout the affected muscles; calcific areas may be low signal; peri-muscular oedema may additionally appear as high signal; signal intensity may return to normal after treatment 4"

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