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"Goodpasture’s syndrome accounts for 1-2% of cases of rapidly progressive glomerulonephritis. It can occur at any age but most commonly affects men aged 20 - 30 with an M:F of 3:1. Smoking commonly predates pulmonary haemorrhage. Other risk factors may include hydrocarbon exposure, infections such as influenza and HLA type."

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"Goodpasture syndrome, also referred as antiglomerular basement membrane (anti-GBM) antibody disease, is an autoimmune disease characterised by damage to the alveolar and renal glomerular basement membranes by a cytotoxic antibody. It is a type of pulmonary-renal syndrome."

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"Patients may present with cough, dyspnoea, haemoptysis, hypoxaemia, anaemia, fatigue, chest pain, uraemia or haematuria. Hypertension is rare."

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"Patients may present with cough, dyspnoea, haemoptysis, hypoxaemia, anaemia, fatigue, chest pain, uraemia or haematuria. Hypertension is rare."

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"Goodpasture syndrome is a type II hypersensitivity reaction with antibodies primarily directed against type IV collagen of the renal glomerular basement membrane. There is further cross-reactivity with the alveolar basement membrane resulting in pulmonary injury. This is typically characterised by rapidly progressive glomerulonephritis (RPGN) and necrotising haemorrhagic interstitial pneumonitis respectively."

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