"primary (e.g. adenocarcinoma in situ, minimally invasive adenocarcinoma, and invasive adenocarcinoma)"
Line 12:17·An e.g. list gives selected examples, so it should not end with 'and' or 'or': 'e.g. adenocarcinoma in situ, minimally invasive adenocarcinoma, and'.
Inline EG
suggestion
"primary (e.g. adenocarcinoma in situ, minimally invasive adenocarcinoma, and invasive adenocarcinoma)"
Line 12:16·Consider replacing a bracketed e.g. with an inline e.g. after a comma.