"There is a recognised regional predilection with increased incidence around the Swiss alps region and in Puerto Rico 3."
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"History and etymology"
Line 31:1·A bold element in the History and etymology section should be a person; it would be useful to have their lifespan details: '<h4>History and etymology</h4> <p>It was initially described by <strong>F Hermansky</strong> '