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Lint: lipoedematous-scalp

Semicolons
suggestion

"The condition is characterised by thickening of the fatty subcutaneous layer of the scalp, over 9 mm but up to several centimetres; the normal thickness of the scalp in adults is ~6 mm measured at the bregma 2. This is visible on CT, ultrasound and MRI, but care should be taken not to mistake rolled up folds of loose scalp or an oblique section through the scalp as actual thickening."

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Oxford Comma
suggestion

"The condition is characterised by thickening of the fatty subcutaneous layer of the scalp, over 9 mm but up to several centimetres; the normal thickness of the scalp in adults is ~6 mm measured at the bregma 2. This is visible on CT, ultrasound and MRI, but care should be taken not to mistake rolled up folds of loose scalp or an oblique section through the scalp as actual thickening."

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Biographical Lifespan
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"History and etymology"

Line 8:1 · A bold element in the History and etymology section should be a person; it would be useful to have their lifespan details: '<h4>History and etymology</h4> <p>The term lipoedematous alopecia was first coined in 1961 by <strong>Coskey</strong> '