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Lint: cutis-verticis-gyrata

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"Depending on the aetiology, the folds may be symmetric (seen more in primary disease) or asymmetric (seen more in secondary disease) 2-4. Furthermore, some patients with primary disease may additionally demonstrate a wide array of neuropsychiatric (e.g. epilepsy, cerebral palsy) or ophthalmologic anomalies (e.g. retinitis pigmentosa, cataracts) 2-4."

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"scalp dermatologic conditions (e.g. benign or malignant tumours, naevi, inflammatory dermatoses, trauma, etc.)"

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"malignancy (e.g. leukaemia)"

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"various aneuploidies (e.g. Turner syndrome, Klinefelter syndrome, etc.)"

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