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Isotope Notation
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"Commonly used radiopharmaceuticals for SPECT epilepsy imaging include technetium-99m (99mTc) ethyl cysteinate dimer (ECD) and 99mTc-hexamethyl propylene amine oxime (HMPAO), which allow imaging of regional cerebral blood flow (rCBF) 18."

Line 99:98 · Write the isotope as symbol-mass, e.g. F-18, not '99mTc'.

"Commonly used radiopharmaceuticals for SPECT epilepsy imaging include technetium-99m (99mTc) ethyl cysteinate dimer (ECD) and 99mTc-hexamethyl propylene amine oxime (HMPAO), which allow imaging of regional cerebral blood flow (rCBF) 18."

Line 99:156 · Write the isotope as symbol-mass, e.g. F-18, not '99mTc'.
Units
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"Commonly used radiopharmaceuticals for SPECT epilepsy imaging include technetium-99m (99mTc) ethyl cysteinate dimer (ECD) and 99mTc-hexamethyl propylene amine oxime (HMPAO), which allow imaging of regional cerebral blood flow (rCBF) 18."

Line 99:98 · Put a space between the number and the unit in '99mTc'.

"Commonly used radiopharmaceuticals for SPECT epilepsy imaging include technetium-99m (99mTc) ethyl cysteinate dimer (ECD) and 99mTc-hexamethyl propylene amine oxime (HMPAO), which allow imaging of regional cerebral blood flow (rCBF) 18."

Line 99:156 · Put a space between the number and the unit in '99mTc'.
Strong
warning

"Drug resistant epilepsy is defined by the International League Against Epilepsy (ILAE) as epilepsy in which sustained seizure freedom (of at least 12 months) has not been achieved despite adequate trials of two tolerated, appropriately chosen and used antiseizure medications, whether as monotherapies or in combination 16."

Line 8:4 · Generally, don't use bold in text: '<strong>Drug resistant epilepsy</strong>'
Acronyms
warning

"physical effects/complications of epileptic seizures, e.g. injury, death (including sudden unexpected death in epilepsy (SUDEP)), neurocognitive deterioration"

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"If perfusion neuroimaging is performed during a seizure (i.e. ictal SPECT), it can be useful for localising the epileptogenic zone 6,7. Postictal SPECT and interictal SPECT are less sensitive than ictal SPECT 12, however, ictal-interictal SPECT subtraction, particularly with MRI coregistration (i.e. subtraction ictal SPECT co-registered to MRI (SISCOM)), can be highly sensitive 13,14."

Line 98:376 · 'SISCOM' has no definition. Spell it out if it's unfamiliar to the audience.
EG List And
warning

"e.g. channelopathies (e.g. Dravet syndrome and fragile X syndrome), neurocutaneous syndromes (e.g. tuberous sclerosis), and chromosomal abnormalities (e.g. Down syndrome, Klinefelter syndrome, and ring chromosome 20 syndrome)"

Line 70:180 · An e.g. list gives selected examples, so it should not end with 'and' or 'or': 'e.g. Down syndrome, Klinefelter syndrome, and'.

"lifestyle restrictions, e.g. driving restrictions, restrictions on employment, limiting exposure to drugs and alcohol"

Line 107:32 · An e.g. list gives selected examples, so it should not end with 'and' or 'or': 'e.g. driving restrictions, restrictions on employment, limiting exposure to drugs and'.
Headings Valid
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Expected headings

  • H1 Terminology
  • H1 Usage
  • H1 Epidemiology
  • H2 Risk factors
  • H2 Associations
  • H1 Clinical presentation
  • H2 Complications
  • H1 Diagnosis
  • H2 Diagnostic criteria
  • H2 Diagnostic clues
  • H1 Pathology
  • H2 Aetiology
  • H2 Location
  • H2 Classification
  • H2 Macroscopic appearance
  • H2 Microscopic appearance
  • H2 Immunophenotype
  • H2 Markers
  • H2 Genetics
  • H1 Radiographic features
  • H2 Plain radiograph
  • H2 Mammography
  • H2 Antenatal ultrasound
  • H2 Transoesophageal echocardiography
  • H2 Ultrasound
  • H2 CT
  • H3 Dual-energy CT
  • H2 Angiography (DSA)
  • H2 MRI
  • H2 CT/MRI
  • H2 Nuclear medicine
  • H3 PET-CT
  • H3 PET-MRI
  • H1 Radiology report
  • H1 Treatment and prognosis
  • H2 Complications
  • H1 History and etymology
  • H1 Differential diagnosis
  • H2 Clinical differential diagnosis
  • H1 Practical points
  • H1 See also

"​Radiographic features"

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"MRI"

Line 92:1 · "MRI" is under the wrong parent heading (found under "​Radiographic features").

"Nuclear medicine"

Line 96:1 · "Nuclear medicine" is under the wrong parent heading (found under "​Radiographic features").

"SPECT"

Line 97:1 · "SPECT" is not a recognised heading for this article type.

"FDG-PET"

Line 100:1 · "FDG-PET" is not a recognised heading for this article type.

"PET-TSPO"

Line 102:1 · "PET-TSPO" is not a recognised heading for this article type.
Semicolons
suggestion

"at least two or more unprovoked (or reflex) seizures occurring more than 24 hours apart; or"

Line 4:95 · Use semicolons judiciously.

"one unprovoked (or reflex) seizure and a probability of further seizures similar to the general recurrence risk after two unprovoked seizures, occurring over the next 10 years; or"

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Inline EG
suggestion

"may be motor onset or non-motor onset (e.g. sensory or autonomic)"

Line 29:46 · Consider replacing a bracketed e.g. with an inline e.g. after a comma.

"e.g. channelopathies (e.g. Dravet syndrome and fragile X syndrome), neurocutaneous syndromes (e.g. tuberous sclerosis), and chromosomal abnormalities (e.g. Down syndrome, Klinefelter syndrome, and ring chromosome 20 syndrome)"

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Commas
suggestion

"may be motor seizures, e.g. tonic-clonic (preferred term to 'grand mal') seizure, clonic seizure, tonic seizure, myoclonic-tonic-clonic seizure, myoclonic-atonic seizure, atonic seizure"

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"acquired, e.g. stroke, cerebral palsy, post meningitis, traumatic brain injury, vascular malformations, mesial temporal sclerosis, meningoencephaloceles, tumours (e.g. long-term epilepsy-associated tumours, low-grade gliomas, etc.), porencephalic cysts"

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Parentheses
suggestion

"Commonly used radiopharmaceuticals for SPECT epilepsy imaging include technetium-99m (99mTc) ethyl cysteinate dimer (ECD) and 99mTc-hexamethyl propylene amine oxime (HMPAO), which allow imaging of regional cerebral blood flow (rCBF) 18."

Line 99:92 · Use parentheses judiciously. There are at least 3 sets in this paragraph.