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Biographical Name
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"The term "porphyria" comes from the Greek 'porphyros', which means purple. Many believe Hippocrates of Kos (460-377 BCE) 6 to have described the disease in Case XI from his “Epidemics Book III” regarding a young Greek woman from Thasos. It is now thought that this case represented acute intermittent porphyria 7. Archibald L Cochrane (1909-1988) 5, one of the most important figures in modern medicine, suffered from porphyria, and some speculate the disease may have been the impetus for his scientific approach to medicine."

Line 64:91 · In a biographical citation, the name should be formatted correctly: '<strong> Hippocrates</strong> of Kos (460-377 BCE) <sup>6</sup> to have described the disease in Case XI from his “Epidemics Book III” regarding a young Greek woman from Thasos. It is now thought that this case represented acute intermittent porphyria <sup>7</sup>. <strong>Archibald L Cochrane</strong> (1909'
Acronyms
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"The term "porphyria" comes from the Greek 'porphyros', which means purple. Many believe Hippocrates of Kos (460-377 BCE) 6 to have described the disease in Case XI from his “Epidemics Book III” regarding a young Greek woman from Thasos. It is now thought that this case represented acute intermittent porphyria 7. Archibald L Cochrane (1909-1988) 5, one of the most important figures in modern medicine, suffered from porphyria, and some speculate the disease may have been the impetus for his scientific approach to medicine."

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Commas
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"The clinical presentation is non-specific and variable, depending on the type of porphyria. Generally, the most common symptoms are abdominal pain (74%), back pain (56%), chest pain (58%), and nausea and vomiting (73%), 8,10; however, there can be a wide range of neuropsychiatric and cutaneous manifestations as well."

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Semicolons
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"The clinical presentation is non-specific and variable, depending on the type of porphyria. Generally, the most common symptoms are abdominal pain (74%), back pain (56%), chest pain (58%), and nausea and vomiting (73%), 8,10; however, there can be a wide range of neuropsychiatric and cutaneous manifestations as well."

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"Porphyrin can be overproduced in the liver or bone marrow; some authors classify porphyrias as erythropoietic or hepatic according to the main site of overproduction of haem precursors 8:"

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Biographical Lifespan
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"History and etymology"

Line 63:1 · A bold element in the History and etymology section should be a person; it would be useful to have their lifespan details: '<h4>History and etymology</h4> <p>The term "porphyria" comes from the Greek 'porphyros', which means purple. Many believe<strong> Hippocrates</strong> '