Line 6:1·"Associations" is under the wrong parent heading (found under "Pathology").
There Is
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"It usually presents at childhood. There is a recognised increased female predilection."
Line 3:38·Don't start a sentence with 'There is'.
Biographical Lifespan
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"History and etymology"
Line 8:1·A bold element in the History and etymology section should be a person; it would be useful to have their lifespan details: '<h4>History and etymology</h4> <p>This condition was first described by <strong>Hall</strong> '