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Adjectival Hyphens
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"The aetiology is uncertain, although a localised infectious (viral) or immunological process is suspected. Post-surgical cases, particularly after cervical decompression, have been described 5."

Line 10:111 · Only use medical adjectival hyphens where the letters at the end and start of the compound word are the same, e.g. post-transplant. In this case, don't use the hyphen: 'Post-surgical'.
Biographical Date Spacing
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"This syndrome was first described in 1879 by French physician Alix Joffroy (1884-1908) 6,7, however, was popularised with a larger series in 1948 by British neurologists Maurice John Parsonage (1915-2008) and John W Aldren Turner (1911-1980) 3."

Line 20:66 · In a biographical citation, the date should be correctly spaced: '<strong>Alix Joffroy </strong>(1884-1908) <sup>6,7</sup>, however, was popularised with a larger series in 1948 by British neurologists <strong>Maurice John</strong> <strong>Parsonage </strong>(1915'
Biographical Name
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"This syndrome was first described in 1879 by French physician Alix Joffroy (1884-1908) 6,7, however, was popularised with a larger series in 1948 by British neurologists Maurice John Parsonage (1915-2008) and John W Aldren Turner (1911-1980) 3."

Line 20:66 · In a biographical citation, the name should be formatted correctly: '<strong>Alix Joffroy </strong>(1884-1908) <sup>6,7</sup>, however, was popularised with a larger series in 1948 by British neurologists <strong>Maurice John</strong> <strong>Parsonage </strong>(1915-2008) and <strong>John W Aldren Turner</strong> (1911'
There Is
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"There is a male predominance (M:F 2-11.5:1) 1. Patients from 3 months to 85 years old have been reported, but most are between the 3rd and 7th decades of life."

Line 3:4 · Don't start a sentence with 'There is'.
Commas
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"The presentation is typically quite sudden, with an onset of a painful shoulder girdle and progressive weakness. Symptoms are, however, non-specific and can mimic numerous other much more common conditions such as cervical spondylosis, labral tears with paralabral cyst or other suprascapular notch masses, rotator cuff deficiency, shoulder impingement, calcific tendinitis and adhesive capsulitis 1,2."

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Oxford Comma
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"The most striking features of MRI are denervation changes in muscles. Initially, the muscle appears normal. Over the next few weeks, a high T2 signal develops. Gradually, especially in patients with a protracted course, atrophy and fatty infiltration will develop with the increase in T1 signal and decreased muscle bulk. Also later in the course of the disease, muscle wasting without fatty infiltration may be evident."

Line 15:230 · Use the Oxford comma in 'course, atrophy and fatty'.
Biographical Lifespan
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"History and etymology"

Line 19:1 · A bold element in the History and etymology section should be a person; it would be useful to have their lifespan details: '<h4>History and etymology</h4> <p>This syndrome was first described in 1879 by French physician <strong>Alix Joffroy </strong>(1884-1908) <sup>6,7</sup>, however, was popularised with a larger series in 1948 by British neurologists <strong>Maurice John</strong> '
Inline EG
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"mass in the suprascapular notch (e.g. ganglion)"

Line 28:51 · Consider replacing a bracketed e.g. with an inline e.g. after a comma.